It's there, he knows it is. If he searches a little bit longer...
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 9 · 2026-02-02
So. Many. Bees.
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
🐝
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 10 · 2026-02-02
FOXES are not evil!
...THAT Fox is evil!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
Eh, more 'mystical force trying to teach Jokey something'...
...And maybe a little bit evil.
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 12 · 2026-02-02
You know the universe hates you, when even the fudging WIND works against you!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
This time loop is a bit less passive than most XD
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 14 · 2026-02-02
When there's nothing else you can do, spite really can keep you going, huh?
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
Three forces run the universe: love, spite, and boredom.
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Gontonyakvia AO32026-02-03
Exactly!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
🙂↕️
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 15 · 2026-02-02
Poor jokey...
Has he tried fist-fighting the fox? He might win, as the fox doesn't have fists, and would therefore be disqualified...
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
Oh my stars 😂😂😂
Fair point, honestly, it would be disqualified from a fist fight.
I didn't think of him just trying to fight the fox... He's like five inches tall, but hey, it's not any dumber than anything else he tries XD
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Gontonyakvia AO32026-02-03
I mean, they often fight Asreal, so...
I think he could take him. Lol
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
They often RUN FROM AZRAEL. And, you know, there's usually a lot of them... Including much stronger Smurfs than Jokey...
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 16 · 2026-02-02
Has he tried just holding onto the cliff instead of going up farther?
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
He'd pass out eventually. Or an earthquake would happen...
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 19 · 2026-02-02
Yes, it is bad that you think it is cute, Jokester Smurf! Lol
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
He's trauma bonding, lol
To be clear, it IS bad that he thinks it's cute. He and the fox might bond, but it's still a magical monster that keeps literally eating him. It's part of the fic's bittersweet, darkly humorous tone.
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 20 · 2026-02-02
Glass-half-full kinda Smurf! 🙂
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
He's a jolly dude at heart, you know?
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 29 · 2026-02-02
See! He CAN stay there for a while! If he can manage to stang a few berries on his run over, maybe he can figure out a way to hang on for a few days, the fox will get bored and hungry eventually!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
That's actually a pretty good idea. Something would randomly prevent it from working, of course, as those are the rules of the time loop. Still, though. I might address that in a future rewrite. :)
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 31 · 2026-02-02
Come ON than! Use that big brain of yours Jokester! You can figure it out, if you just KEEP TRYING!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
You try spending 53 hours straight fighting for your life, see if you don't get a little bit depressed. But yep, he can figure out ANYTHING if he just keeps trying — he may be a fool, after all, but he's hardly an idiot.
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 41 · 2026-02-02
PUNCH. THE. FOX!!!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
👊 🦊
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 42 · 2026-02-02
I love foxes, but this guy's just a DICK.
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
Yes she is, isn't she?
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 43 · 2026-02-02
Is he... Is he DOMESTICATING the fox??? Lol
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
A little bit XD
To be fair, they're trapped in this together.... Maybe.
(Honestly, even I'm not sure if the fox is actually magical or a normal fox...)
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 45 · 2026-02-02
Okay! Something new! New is good! If you can't find a point to trying to escape, change the goal. Make the goal knowing this weird anti-world like the back of your hand. Make the point riding the fox. Make the pony seeing every color the paint can be! There are many things to keep you motivated, ya big trickster! Pick one!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
Exactly. There's always SOMETHING to keep you going. Even if you have to change the goal.
You know, if I ever made the timeloop much longer, I'd probably have some of that happen. Have Jokey goof off on some loops and explore and change his goals...
I'm so glad you're enjoying, thank you for all the great comments 😊
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 46 · 2026-02-02
THERE YOU GO JOKESTER! Look at things from a different angle!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
There's always another angle 😁
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 47 · 2026-02-02
Examine the injuries. Bring some leaves with you, and use them to teach yourself about healing!
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
Oooh, that's a good idea.
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 48 · 2026-02-02
New plan? Oooh! Fun!
Why doesn't he wrap his hands in leaves, then try climbing the sharp rocks?
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
Fun is Jokey's middle name 🤣
And shhhhh 🤫 Spoilers, dear.
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 49 · 2026-02-02
Why don't you clime a tree, and glide over the cliff with a leaf? Schemer uses feathers to do that? It might work...
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
...
STOP COMING UP WITH BETTER IDEAS THAN I DID
(just kidding, don't, these are soooo going into a rewrite someday 🙃)
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Gontonyakvia AO3on Chapter 50 · 2026-02-02
See? You get a few more days than the rest of the world. You get a little more time to feel, to learn, to FLY. Even with all the bad, that's gotta feel good.
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ArukirAuthorvia AO32026-02-03
It does. Honestly, I wish I'd expanded on this chapter a little. The fic's pretty dark, but Jokey does have his fun moments. I mean, he gets to FLY. That definitely is a bright spot in all of this.
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So. Many. Bees.
🐝
FOXES are not evil!
...THAT Fox is evil!
Eh, more 'mystical force trying to teach Jokey something'...
...And maybe a little bit evil.
You know the universe hates you, when even the fudging WIND works against you!
This time loop is a bit less passive than most XD
When there's nothing else you can do, spite really can keep you going, huh?
Three forces run the universe: love, spite, and boredom.
Exactly!
🙂↕️
Poor jokey...
Has he tried fist-fighting the fox? He might win, as the fox doesn't have fists, and would therefore be disqualified...
Oh my stars 😂😂😂
Fair point, honestly, it would be disqualified from a fist fight.
I didn't think of him just trying to fight the fox... He's like five inches tall, but hey, it's not any dumber than anything else he tries XD
I mean, they often fight Asreal, so...
I think he could take him. Lol
They often RUN FROM AZRAEL. And, you know, there's usually a lot of them... Including much stronger Smurfs than Jokey...
Has he tried just holding onto the cliff instead of going up farther?
He'd pass out eventually. Or an earthquake would happen...
Yes, it is bad that you think it is cute, Jokester Smurf! Lol
He's trauma bonding, lol
To be clear, it IS bad that he thinks it's cute. He and the fox might bond, but it's still a magical monster that keeps literally eating him. It's part of the fic's bittersweet, darkly humorous tone.
Glass-half-full kinda Smurf! 🙂
He's a jolly dude at heart, you know?
See! He CAN stay there for a while! If he can manage to stang a few berries on his run over, maybe he can figure out a way to hang on for a few days, the fox will get bored and hungry eventually!
That's actually a pretty good idea. Something would randomly prevent it from working, of course, as those are the rules of the time loop. Still, though. I might address that in a future rewrite. :)
Come ON than! Use that big brain of yours Jokester! You can figure it out, if you just KEEP TRYING!
You try spending 53 hours straight fighting for your life, see if you don't get a little bit depressed. But yep, he can figure out ANYTHING if he just keeps trying — he may be a fool, after all, but he's hardly an idiot.
PUNCH. THE. FOX!!!
👊 🦊
I love foxes, but this guy's just a DICK.
Yes she is, isn't she?
Is he... Is he DOMESTICATING the fox??? Lol
A little bit XD
To be fair, they're trapped in this together.... Maybe.
(Honestly, even I'm not sure if the fox is actually magical or a normal fox...)
Okay! Something new! New is good! If you can't find a point to trying to escape, change the goal. Make the goal knowing this weird anti-world like the back of your hand. Make the point riding the fox. Make the pony seeing every color the paint can be! There are many things to keep you motivated, ya big trickster! Pick one!
Exactly. There's always SOMETHING to keep you going. Even if you have to change the goal.
You know, if I ever made the timeloop much longer, I'd probably have some of that happen. Have Jokey goof off on some loops and explore and change his goals...
I'm so glad you're enjoying, thank you for all the great comments 😊
THERE YOU GO JOKESTER! Look at things from a different angle!
There's always another angle 😁
Examine the injuries. Bring some leaves with you, and use them to teach yourself about healing!
Oooh, that's a good idea.
New plan? Oooh! Fun!
Why doesn't he wrap his hands in leaves, then try climbing the sharp rocks?
Fun is Jokey's middle name 🤣
And shhhhh 🤫 Spoilers, dear.
Why don't you clime a tree, and glide over the cliff with a leaf? Schemer uses feathers to do that? It might work...
...
STOP COMING UP WITH BETTER IDEAS THAN I DID
(just kidding, don't, these are soooo going into a rewrite someday 🙃)
See? You get a few more days than the rest of the world. You get a little more time to feel, to learn, to FLY. Even with all the bad, that's gotta feel good.
It does. Honestly, I wish I'd expanded on this chapter a little. The fic's pretty dark, but Jokey does have his fun moments. I mean, he gets to FLY. That definitely is a bright spot in all of this.
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