Chapter 1: Descriptions!
Explaining a bit about the characters' new identities (done from the perspective of a outsider). Probably a few weeks/months after they arrive? Not really part of the story, but useful!
Hel didn't have MPD, they literally had two souls, they're gods so it can happen. It was either this or a two-face thing, and I'd rather not have one of my characters be crazy, so...
PS: I have texture, length, then color. I am (now) aware that this is wrong. I don't care. I am leaving it (mostly to spite my sister/editor). Sorry if it is annoying.
Lue Larson was 41 years old. He was 5'7, had bright green eyes and curly, long, red hair. He was a man who constantly took on different jobs, being equally fine in all of them. He was a quite sly man, who loved pranks. He was very fun loving and happy, but also seemed quite wise at times. He was the father of seven, six of which being the children of his wife, Susan.
Susan Larson was 40 years old. She was 6'0, had blue eyes and straight, long, black hair. She was kind and calm, though could be furious when it came to defending her children. She liked cooking and knitting. She was a nurse. She was the wife of Lue, and the mother of six of his children.
The oldest child was Sylvester, who was 19 years old. He was 6'3, with green eyes and straight, shoulder-length, blonde hair. He was friendly, and often clumsy, but could also seem very regal at times. No one knew who his mother was, besides the fact that it wasn't Susan. He was the go-to babysitter in his area, and all the kids liked him.
The second oldest was Finn, who was 17 years old. He was 6'2 and fit, with green eyes and curly, short, black hair. He wore lots of black, and spent most of his time at either a coffee shop or the gym. He would disappear at night, and was occasionally seen chasing squirrels. He had a vicious rivalry with the mailman.
The third oldest was Alexander, who most called Xander, who was 16 years old. He stood at 6'0 and was thin with green eyes and long, black hair with dyed blue tips, which he often kept in a ponytail. He was a very introspective boy, who loved art and snakes. Many believed that he was likely one of the ones doing graffiti in the area, but he was helpful and responsible, so no one said anything.
The middle two were Hannah and Helene, a pair of Siamese twins, who were 15 years old. They were shorter than their brothers, but only by a few inches, standing at 5'6. Both of them had shoulder-length hair that curled like a bob at the bottom. Hannah, on the right, had black hair and green eyes. Helene, on the left, had white hair and blue eyes. They wore a lot of blue and white, and both were very fond of chess. Helene was quite interested in being a doctor, and Hannah was very interested in history. They usually wore a blue and white winter coat, as they ran cold.
The youngest two were Nickolas and Victoria, who went by Nicky and Vicki, a pair of twins, who were 10 years old. Nicky was a boy, and Vicki was a girl. They were both 4'3, had green eyes, bright orange hair, and round glasses. Nicky's hair was short and curly. Vicki's hair was long and curly. They were both very quiet and calm, and loved reading. Vicki rather enjoyed making bracelets and drawing. Nicky liked architecture and climbing trees. While they were usually very peaceful, during the three days of the full moon they would often chase small animals and run around very energetically, during those three nights they would also be impossible to find.
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I love this 😍 Especially these two tags:
"Hel isn't crazy, she just has two souls" XD
"Fenrir doesn't like Earth, Fenrir likes coffee" XD XD
I like how Odin is depicted here, and Loki's 'they're *children!*, and the fact that he discussed Sleipnir with Svaðilfari. Do they co-parent in this AU?
I'm glad you like it ☺️
I'm not quite sure if they co-parent... Probably?
Neat! I love it, especially Hel being Siamese twins.
Thank you! I thought it would be interesting!
I LOVE THIS 😍
SLEIPNIR HAS A HORSE (CRUSH) FRIEND!
[some of which were now getting used to new eyes.]
— There's something I never considered, really interesting. I love when things like that are touched on.
["And doubly beautiful they are sweethearts!" Loki praised]
— Awww 🥰 Loki is a good daddy.
[They were standing in the middle of a crop circle, because Gods are not subtle.]
— Truer words were never spoken XD
Jörmungandr is sassy and I love him 💕
Farmer Jack is such a crazy dude. He sees a weird ass family (including a two-headed girl and a boy crushing on his horse) who he's pretty sure are there illegally, and his reaction is "Wanna bunk in my place?" I love him with all my heart 😍😍😍
This is great and I hope you continue with it.
Thank you for reading!
Yes, Loki is good dad 😊
Jörmungandr is sssasssiesssst sssnake!
Farmer Jack doesn't care lol.
Another great chapter! I love the little domestic moments and how much love is obviously there between all of them. Hair rushing, Loki moving with Sigyn, name arguments... It's just adorable and I love it. Good job, I look forward to more!
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